Whether it was for fun or as a profession, during middle school and all througout high school I knew I wanted to write. Now I'm 20 years old trying to improve my skills after taking a couple years hiatus. The stories I write are aimed towards young adults, but I hope they're fun for everyone!
Memories
Memories
I was not unlike the house
On the outskirts of town
In need of construction
With a desire for care
While you were the castle
Surrounded by subjects
With constant attention
And a longing for more
Invisible forces drew us
Overlooking differences
We embraced each other
Everything within my arms
Like a gentle breeze
Caressing my cheek
Beautiful moments pass
Leaving magnificent memories
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Summary: Written for the prompt over at Simply Snickers (link can be found at the side under ‘Writing Prompts’): key words include magnificent and moments. Two very different people meet, fall in love, and then part in time. The memories are still nice…
Memories
I was not unlike the house
On the outskirts of town
In need of construction
With a desire for care
While you were the castle
Surrounded by subjects
With constant attention
And a longing for more
Invisible forces drew us
Overlooking differences
We embraced each other
Everything within my arms
Like a gentle breeze
Caressing my cheek
Beautiful moments pass
Leaving magnificent memories
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Nicely done. The imagery works so well. Boy, I remember those twenty-something days. ;-)
Thanks for participating at SIMPLY SNICKERS this week.
Blessings,
Linda
THERAPY, at NICKERS AND INK
By the way . . . if you have any interest in memes, I just started a new daily blogging meme called MEME EXPRESS (on blogspot.com). Welcome aboard, if you like!
Comment by Linda - Nickers and Ink July 2, 2008 @ 12:08 pmVery beautiful. I feel the words and can certainly relate. Thank you for being. Peace, Light and Love to you and yours. . . CordieB.
Comment by cordieb July 3, 2008 @ 3:22 pmLovely reflection on precious moments.
Comment by Gemma July 4, 2008 @ 12:38 pmI remember my first love…and he is still a magnificent memory.
This story, hidden in a poem is as old as time and common around the world, but still, unique to each one of us.
Great poem!
-Bev
Comment by Bev July 6, 2008 @ 6:52 amMoments we’ve all shared and pull out of our memories from time to time to enjoy. Thank you for sharing this!
Comment by texasblu July 7, 2008 @ 1:12 amVery beautifully written! A great poem!
Comment by Jane Doe July 7, 2008 @ 9:02 am